Face Engine

For countless days and nights, the mighty ship drifted, attacked from every corner, the waves below, the storms above, the winds outside, the hunger inside. A shape appeared on the ...

Having read Demetri Saint Randrac's critique, I've come to the conclusion that most if not all of my own criticisms were inappropriate. I was not reading with an open enough ...

I'm an Atheist, and I liked this poem. Admittedly, it is making me want to go on a rant in defence of my Atheism (probably not your intention), though I ...

I have the exact same problem as you. Only I can never actually finish stories I start! That story sounds really good. Different, at least. I can only think of ...

I reality like this poem, though I'm not sure if my interpretation of it is correct. Am I right in thinking it's describing the last few moments of a time ...

Thanks for informing me that you've revised this. As I said last time, this is really good. I don't have much to complain about, but the line "I was shattered ...

On a dark throne, devoid of light, immaterial, the architect worked his magic, and from his magic sprung a formula, and his careless builders, born from the formula, obeyed the ...

This is intended to be a novel. Knowing me, though, I will get distracted at some point with a new idea-I'm one of those people who can only write about ...

Thanks guys! "You" is supposed to refer to our ancient ancestors, but it is also addressing one particular megalomaniac. I won't say who, because I want to give readers the ...

"Nothing is Impossible, to him who will try" So, Great Mortal, who did you wish to succeed you? Did your friends hear you correctly, as you lay dying? Or was ...

This was good-as far as I'm concerned, you can't go wrong with poetry anyway. But you said you're looking for advice, and nine people so far seem to have ignored ...

Thanks for your reviews. I can assure you that I was fully aware that not a lot happened here, but more exciting stuff is to come (and it will become ...

I have to say, I'm quite impressed-are you really 13?! This looks more like something someone my age would write! A couple of small things to do with convention-generally, punctuation ...

Yes, as a builder, my diet consists purely of bricks and brick based products, which isn't easy on the digestive system. What is the value of Pi?

You know you're a writer when you're dissapointed when something real goes on and on and on without a storylike ending (so you can base your story on it), and ...